Original copy from the website CaptainKYSO can be found here. The site owner wanted a good mix of SEO and keywords while continuing in the funny and witty vein that the rest of the website's writing was known for. There were some minor adjustments done after I submitted the final draft because there was the perceived need to add more details concerning how the t shirts were manufactured. Although in places the necessity of mentioning aspects of the manufacturing processes created a certain level of "clunkyness" in the flow of the dialogue; overall I believe the "About" page still holds up and conveys the necessary information in a fun way.
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